Tuesday, September 4, 2012

Haiku Moon




    coyotes cry over
        lost moonlight
    river running through
        silver dawn




Haiku Heights 4 -moon
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6 comments:

  1. PattiKenSeptember 4, 2012 at 7:24 AM

    Very pretty images.

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  2. ChèvrefeuilleSeptember 4, 2012 at 11:07 AM

    Nice image you have painted here with your words. Maybe you can try to rearrange this into the three lines ... as haiku is known for.

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  3. GraceSeptember 4, 2012 at 3:58 PM

    I like the lost moonlight ~ Three lines would be perfect ~

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  4. Magical Mystical TeacherSeptember 4, 2012 at 4:59 PM

    Believe it or not, I heard coyotes calling yesterday morning---but the moon was shining! :)

    Pursuing the Moon


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  5. AnonymousSeptember 4, 2012 at 9:09 PM

    I am there ... nicely done.
    September Heights - Choreographing Stars

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  6. Vinay Leo R.September 5, 2012 at 6:56 AM

    Agree with Grace and Kris :) 3 would be nice, though I have seen haiqua. The thought through this verse is beautiful, Lorna.

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