Tuesday, September 4, 2012

Haiku Moon




    coyotes cry over
        lost moonlight
    river running through
        silver dawn




Haiku Heights 4 -moon

6 comments:

  1. Nice image you have painted here with your words. Maybe you can try to rearrange this into the three lines ... as haiku is known for.

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  2. I like the lost moonlight ~ Three lines would be perfect ~

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  3. Believe it or not, I heard coyotes calling yesterday morning---but the moon was shining! :)

    Pursuing the Moon


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  4. Agree with Grace and Kris :) 3 would be nice, though I have seen haiqua. The thought through this verse is beautiful, Lorna.

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