Wednesday, September 12, 2012

Rain

    in perfect beauty
    each dry day shudders for rain -
    a sulking smoky scent



Haiku Heights - rain

5 comments:

  1. Awesome haiku. Shuddering for rain.......has been a long time without at this side of the planet, but when it hits it will be ferocious.

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  2. Perfect haiku on rain ... the image you paint in this haiku is very nice, well done ...

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  3. That scent is also quite similar to the scent the earth brings out when the raindrops fall.

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  4. Very dry environment begging for rain, with scent of wildfires threatening!! This was our summer of 2011 in Texas ... we did much better this year.

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  5. I feel the shudder, see the cracks in the ground.

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