Sunday, October 14, 2012

Hidden Moon

the mist hugs the trees
the grey clouds are so thick

the moon cannot lick

her white line down a river
flowing on and on unseen





Tanka on Tuesday

3 comments:

  1. Beautiful. I can see moonlight on water that would be there if not for the grayness.

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  2. nice lorna...but sad that the moon cannot shine along the river. clear away grey clouds! =)

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  3. Very sensual. A different hazy love.

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