Brrrrrr. Cold! I love "slipping down this cold canyon" especially.
I agree with Sherry. Brrrrr. Captures extreme cold!
With respect for each word, you take us to the river and make us feel the winter's cold. This is magical, Lorna.
Distilled, like a fine liqueur
A dangerous winter path luring us onward by its beauty. I hope the ice on the river is strong enough to support us if we slip and fall off the path
Your words provide a perfect glimpse of the scene. I love it.
Gives me shivers. Such a concise description with few words.
A well written succinct poem. Nice!McGuffy's Readerhttp://www.mcguffysreader.blogspot.com
mmm. i see and feel this!