Monday, April 22, 2013

Hightailer Field Note

yes, resurrection—
the hightailers are up again
quite quick and skinny
May every cache last all winter,
each one of us bask in the sun

6 comments:

  1. The new cycle begins again,,,bringing nourishment for all seasons,,,I like this a lot,,,

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  2. And we do bask, having missed it for so long.......

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  3. I never seemed to be able to store enough ... so I moved south. :)

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  4. i like the shape of this, very effective slant rhyme and all those skinny i's in the middle growing and slowing to a series of plump vowels at the end ... well done :-)

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  5. Thanks for the interesting analysis. I really enjoy the crafting once I have a strong feeling for something.

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