Wednesday, February 26, 2014

grey-brown fog

grey-brown fog
fence posts lean against their wires
this silent winter road

I am imagining Tai Chi
hands brushing clouds, bringing  sunlight

9 comments:

  1. I so love this - "hands brushing clouds" - I love that move in tai chi!

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  2. smiles...cool...i like the concrete image of the first verse
    and almost artist feel of the second

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    1. Nice comment on the difference between the sections. Thanks

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  3. oh you paint a beautiful image with your words here lorna

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  4. I can really see the image you paint here..

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  5. Wonderful, Lorna. Lovely contrast of seasons. This image of "Tai Chi / hands brushing clouds" is beautiful.

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  6. Gosh! And they could be that when we are not looking.

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