Monday, September 17, 2012

Magnetic Passage

magnetic passage
oceans of birds following

soft south, the green feed

sudden swallows decided
good bye canyon, it's time

5 comments:

  1. I love it when the birds act as if with one mind. Little seabirds do that so well, swooping and diving en mass. It's remarkable to watch.

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    1. Yes, it always is a new surprise. Fish, too.

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  2. "magnetic passage"
    I like that!

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  3. Beautiful. A triumph of brevity and compression.

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    1. Thanks. Haiku is so hard for me. I love lots and lots of words!

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