Monday, September 17, 2012

Magnetic Passage

magnetic passage
oceans of birds following

soft south, the green feed

sudden swallows decided
good bye canyon, it's time
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5 comments:

  1. Sherry Blue SkySeptember 17, 2012 at 5:38 PM

    I love it when the birds act as if with one mind. Little seabirds do that so well, swooping and diving en mass. It's remarkable to watch.

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  2. SusanSeptember 17, 2012 at 5:44 PM

    "magnetic passage"
    I like that!

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  3. AnonymousSeptember 18, 2012 at 3:52 AM

    Beautiful. A triumph of brevity and compression.

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    1. Lorna CahallSeptember 18, 2012 at 8:21 AM

      Thanks. Haiku is so hard for me. I love lots and lots of words!

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