Poetry that is earth based, mystical, philosophical.
Lovely, Lorna. The color imagery is wonderful.I like the idea of the mouse, which tends to have negative associations, picking up a "fresh scent". Nice play on words.
Hmm. Interesting to think of the mouse's way as "pilgrim's pathway" in a "quilted dawn."
You conjure up the whole, magickal image.
Love the "hushed pilgrim pathway".
I like how you evoked the sense of smell in this one...and your use of color.
we all must make our journeys eh?even the mouse...wonderful little short lorna...
peace, barefoot walking slowly toward me floating grey and silver the Holy flashing through peace, a gathering of flickering angels he then...
Lovely, Lorna. The color imagery is wonderful.
ReplyDeleteI like the idea of the mouse, which tends to have negative associations, picking up a "fresh scent". Nice play on words.
Hmm. Interesting to think of the mouse's way as "pilgrim's pathway" in a "quilted dawn."
ReplyDeleteYou conjure up the whole, magickal image.
ReplyDeleteLove the "hushed pilgrim pathway".
ReplyDeleteI like how you evoked the sense of smell in this one...and your use of color.
ReplyDeletewe all must make our journeys eh?
ReplyDeleteeven the mouse...
wonderful little short lorna...