lock it behind you,
save the explanations for later —
trust this misty morning
overhead, low flying geese
calling each other to an open field
save the explanations for later —
trust this misty morning
overhead, low flying geese
calling each other to an open field
I needed this today. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteYes, trust!
ReplyDeleteHi there ... the folks over at Poetry Jam would enjoy this one too!!! All about birds this week.
ReplyDeletethere is something comforting to me of hearing the geese flying over the field....trust the morning, i like that...and locking the door so there is no way back...
ReplyDeleteAh, geese. I love to watch them fly, especially in groups. Such grace. (But on the ground they can be a force to contend with..not fun being chased by them. Ha.)
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing with Poetry Jam!
How many years I have watched the geese V north and south with just that feeling? Wonderful capture, Lorna.
ReplyDeleteFollow the geese to an open field! lovely and I have done this. Thoughtful images, thanks.
ReplyDeleteYes! Love the comforting feeling in your words.
ReplyDeleteClose the door and walk. Great words
ReplyDeleteYou painted such a clear scene in a few lines here. We have geese mainly in winter here as this is one of the places they are heading when they fly south. Love seeing them in their big Vs.
ReplyDeleteThat's a great way to deal with a disagreement
ReplyDeletewise words in this poem
Lovely geese in formation! This is educational. Yes, take a stand! Nicely Lorna!
ReplyDeleteHank
I like the feel of this. It calls the lover to just enjoy the moment. I sense the willingness to forgive. Nice.
ReplyDeletei loved this! i can simply imagine that... thanks... smiles...
ReplyDeleteThis is fabulous. A perfect capture of peace and the moment. I love geese, low flying or sailing on a pond. :-)
ReplyDeleteWonderful - with a great sense of opening out, after locking 'it' behind you.
ReplyDeleteStepping out with trust without looking back - good advice and words I needed to hear. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteDropping by from Verse First
http://ilasoulpoems.blogspot.co.nz/
Love formations high
ReplyDeleteCaptures the warm souls aloft
Pairs flying through life