His poem hit rocky consonants
flowed over sudden waterfalls
into a short shaded peace
only to be running
from the owl's sharp claws,
shifting to a slow
gear, quite low
breathing
home.
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Creative Bloomings
Nonet = beginning w/ nine syllables
diminished by one each line
flowed over sudden waterfalls
into a short shaded peace
only to be running
from the owl's sharp claws,
shifting to a slow
gear, quite low
breathing
home.
Challenge by
Creative Bloomings
Nonet = beginning w/ nine syllables
diminished by one each line
What a run! I felt it.
ReplyDeleteThis is so lovely......the "short shaded peace" and "quite low, breathing home."
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