it is true,
I love the moon
but she has never said
she loves me back
should I love the full moon
my heart could freeze
in her purple shadows
beware the blue hares
that run wildly
with the cold moonlit wind
I love the moon
but she has never said
she loves me back
should I love the full moon
my heart could freeze
in her purple shadows
beware the blue hares
that run wildly
with the cold moonlit wind
i love the movement, the image, the surreal ...
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Such a dreamlike evocation. But also, I should add, interesting, to divide each sijo line into a quatrain! This has made the sijo a touch more accessible to the reader. Well done!
ReplyDeleteoo very cool...i like your line breaks in this as well, yet holding true to the essence of the form...nice switch up as well in the last...ha...the blue hares in the moonlit wind...very cool...
ReplyDeleteOoh! Gives me shivers. (The good kind.)
ReplyDeleteNow that's the kind of experimenting with a form that I'm too scared to try - and it words so well. Beautiful imagery too.
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